Even though it is an essay I decided to make it short and it is for one main reason. It’s an animation script which means you can’t talk to much about one thing because the audience will get bored. Also I think I’ve placed everything important (in my opinion) in it so there was no need to try to make it longer. I’ve also decided not to make additional drawings since I described everything that is happening (and it’s really simple).
Yes I could have made it a little bit longer but, look at all this research.
A week of time for the whole project is a tiny little bit short, I think. But I made it. I’m sure that it would be better if I had more time, but it’s always like this. Anyway I made it in time so that’s good.
Feedback and my opinion:
“Character designs realy fit in to their roles. I really like the BODY part, it’s an unusual and interesting idea. I’d like to see it alive, I imagine it to me quite funny. Also you did convince me that animation is not a genre, you’ve got an ally in me.”