LIVE BRIEF – project V

Script, Character Design, Storyboard & Pitch draft

Script

 

script

Character Design

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Storyboard

Aaron’s bit

Different version of Aaron’s bit (Maria’s)

 

Maria’s bit

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Alo’s bit

 

Feedback

Character design

We have been told that characters seem lifeless. Their long limbs and faces are creepy. Also we heard that it isn’t necessary to assign sex to them. Basically it feels like we didn’t spent much time on designing the character which is true, that’s why we will try to do it again, but better.

Script

Also we still have to polish the script but its looking good so far

 

Here are some changes and animatic

Pitch

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